Sean's Untitled

Sean's piece, although quite short, was quite wonderful. I feel like he has a great start to a personal narrative. He shines through on the page and makes me feel like I am there with him. I think that it was a great topic to write about and esspecially loved the part where he mentioned that he was going to rent a movie "but not a porn, they're too expensive." This was excellent and something that helped me see inside the subject of the essay. It also helps us transistion into the entire watching a chick flick alone stage. I do think the essay could have been longer, but I did enjoy it the way it is now.