This poem was a little out there. I really liked some of the words that were used. I'm not so sure if in the beginning of the poem there was anything other than the description happening or not, but it was still pretty. My favorite line of the poem was "Stories chiseled into fireworks of a glass marble." I could just see the crazy mix of colors in the the glass ball.
Some of the things that I think would improve this poem, consist mainly of grammatical things. I think a little more punctuation would benefit the reader. Another thing is that maybe the writer could add a little more direction. I got lost most of the time, which I think was alright for this poem, but some readers might need a little bit more. Other than that, this poem was quite great.
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