Jen Morris' "Shit Brown Chevy Van"

This piece was very interesting. I enjoyed the use of language and the spacing of the piece. I also enjoyed the story behind the piece. I enjoyed how it caught your eye right off by telling you everything about the guy but not telling us who they were. I kept reading to find out every piece about the dark lonely man as I could. The only thing that I would change is where it says "My Dead Uncle's Chevy Van." I would put more emphasis on this by adding spacing around the sentence. It just looks really odd with previous sentences about the van having so much spacing.