This poem is a very simple poem. It also describes a very simple thing. Eating bananas and peanut butter with someone you care about. It also has very descriptive yet open wording. It could be any coffee pot, but it is definitely a certain, rose embossed butter knife. I really think this poem works, just because it is such a simple thing that anyone can imagine. There is simple wording to match the simple structure and simple subject. I also liked the fact that "she" spoke. It adds just a little more of a friendly feel to the poem.
The main things that I didn't think really worked about this poem were small. I think that the dialoge should have been spaced from the main body of the poem. This would allow more emphasis, and maybe even help the reader to understand the poem a little better. Other than that I'm not quite sure what else this poem is lacking.
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