Ditoria's piece was one that made me feel sad. I think this is one of those poems that can help a lot of people out. There are people who could Identify with this type of experience and feel maybe even better if they knew someone else knew something like this. This piece works because it has many great word choices to set the correct mood.
There is a thing that doesn't really work for me in this piece. The thing that bugs me the most about this piece is there is no puctuation. Another thing that could maybe change is if the author used only lowercase letters. This would represent the way that the person feels at the time.
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Good comment, Meg. I think you have an interesting suggestion about the capitalization, because that does seem to capture the chaotic and non-formal nature of the thoughts presented in the poem.
Sonya
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