Adam Deal's "just a moment of realization"

I enjoyed reading this writing because it was a little odd. I had to read it several times before I even got a grasp of exactly what was supposed to be going on. It was kind of like hearing the joke with everyone else and getting it a couple of days later when you're going to bed.
Things that worked for this writing were the language. The usage of everyday words in a non- everyday (?- is that a word) since just seem to work for this piece. Things that didn't work for this work were a little more in my mind. I'm not so sure if I just missed the punchline or there was no punchline. I think I get the most lost in the dialouge, Who is speaking when? What's going on? I'm sure some people can read this and understand it, but for me it was like a puzzle.